Tuesday, August 30, 2011

For You For Eternity 71 Finale


im rly sad that this story ended but all story has to end right. i dont mean to brag but im proud of myself on finishing a whole story. hope you like it and enjoy :)

PART 71

Amna’s point if view:

I arrived at the Singapore airport and I rested for 2 hours freshened up and went out. I decided to go to universal studios. I know it is not the best thing to do so that I can move on. But I had to go. I want to remember the first date we had. I roomed around the place for another 2 hours and went to the spot where we shared our first kiss. Today felt different I miss him I really do.

7mood: I knew that you are going to be here

Amna: 7mood? What are you doing here

the moment i saw him the tears found their way down my cheeks, i miss him ive always imganed his face in my mind. Never has one second pass without me thinking of him.

7mood: I followed you to the airport but you already left, so I took the first flight to here I went to your hotel but they told me that you weren’t there so I came here and waited for you here

The moment he showed up I knew that everything is ok, everything is fine. After hearing him say that I just ran to him and hugged him. I missed him, I missed his smile his face his smell. Everything about him.

Amna: I love you

7mood: I love you more

Fai9al’s point of view:

She went to their mizra3a it the place she goes to when she wants to be alone. I found here sitting in the couch lost in her thoughts.
She looked up to me and saw me looking at her

Mona: what are you doing here?

Fai9al: you belong with me

Mona: fai9-

Fai9al: mona wait, you belong with me, I love the way you don’t hide who you are, you eat like there is no tomorrow and express the way you love food, I love the way you are not a typical girl and hate chick flicks, i love you...

Mona:…

Fai9al: I know this is a shock and I know that you love me too

She came up to me and kissed me on the lips.

7mood’s point of view:

Everything is ok, I decided to spend the 2 nights with her here. We had our first date all over again. I love her I really do.

Shamma’s point of view:

I was at home chillig, it was kind of a boring day. I called some friends but they were busy eli emsafra and stuff. I saw ali walking in the living room, shit I look like crap. Since when do I care about how I look for ali.

Ali: esalam 3alaikm

Shamma: wa3alikm esalam, umm fai9al mob ehnii

Ali: ohh tara hoo galii ayeeb hal awraag ehnii

Shamma: enzain ana ba36eeh eyah

Ali: mashkoora shamma (million dollar smile)

Shamma: el3afow (blush)

Shit did I just blush.

Ali: 'she is very cute when she blushes'

Mona’s point of view:

Fai9al and I were on the couch cuddling watching TV when he received a phone call from shamma.

Fai9al: ohh nsait elawraag enzain a7een bayee (he hung up)

Mona: ok lets go

Fai9al: re’6aitii?

Mona: im gonna let me make it up to you some other time, we have 5 months

Fai9al just laughed

We kissed and went out the door to his house. I love him I really do.

5 months later

(this is me talking not any of the characters)

Mona: omg im nervous a7is enni bamoot

Ghada: sho nervous remember that every bride should be confident

Mona: well I just lied to get you to calm down

Ghada: manoo tara ana ‘6ahrii ey3awernii chub o yalla lazm enseer

Yes it was mona’s wedding and ghada is already 5 months pregnant. She has this little baby bump.

Amna: ok people come down mona we got to go

Shamma: abaaih shaklch wayid 7lew fa9ool beymoot hehehe

Mona: rly?

Ghada: since when are you like this yallah lets go so you can see your fai9al goomii

After the constant arguing mona finaly agreed to go on stage. She looked beautiful all girls envied her while she walked towards the stairs of the stage. She walked gracefully until she took a seat and watched her friends and family dance.

Shamma’s point of view:

Being the sister of the groom actually makes you take responsibility hehehe. Oh well. I like moving a lot in weddings I hate sitting in one place. I walked to the kitchen to see if everything is ready. There was ali talking over the phone. I felt weird the moment I saw him. He closed the phone and walked towards where I was standing.

Ali: hala shamma sh7alch?

Shamma: ana eb5air el7emdillah int’h?

Ali: el7emdillah

Shamma: I hope your enjoying the wedding, excuse me I have to go in now

Ali: yeah im enjoying it, btw you look beautifull (he walked away)

Did he just say that. Omg im blushing.

Amna: oh shamma what are you doing out here

Shamma: ohh amna im going in now, ok ill see in

Amna’s point of view:

I went out just by chance I run into 7mood.

7mood: hey there beautifull you taken?

Amna: yes cant you see im engaged (I showed him the ring)

Yes you got it right 7mood and I are engaged and our wedding is after 4 months.

7mood: ohh so I lost my chances ha?

Amna: yes you did, im happily engaged to my fiancé

7mood: that lucky bastard

Amna: ofcourse he is lucky

7mood: I love you

Amna: I love you more

Back inside the hall….

Shamma got tired of walking here and there so she sat down

Ali’s mom: hala bntii intii shamma e5t elme3rs 9a7?

Shamma: hala feech 5alo, haih na3am ana e5t elme3rs

Ali’s mom: ana um ali

Shamma: allah eysalmch 5alo, sh7alch, inshallah mestansa

Ali’s mom: mnstansa 7abeebti mashkoora

Shamma made a good impression on ali’s mom little did shamma know that ali asked his mom to meet shamma.

It was time for the men to come in. In the lead was fai9al and family and friends behind him. Fai9al walked up the stage towards mona. He kissed her forhead.

Mona: (whisper) I love you

Fai9al: (whispered back) I love you more

They sat next to each other while he held her hand, and every one came up to congratulate them.

Somewhere between the crowd…

5alid: how is my wife and baby?

Ghada: they are very fine el7emdillah

5alid places his hand on her belly and sighed.

5alid: ba3adnii mob rayim a9adig enni bastiwi obow

Ghada: well believe it

5alid: I love you

Ghada: I love you more

And that is how everything ended. Everyone got their happy ending. Except for sara. If your wondering sara ended marrying some rich guy that her family forced to marry. Now she married to him and god knows what happened to her. While Rashid went back to Australia and stayed there this time working. Jassim on the other hand got married to a lovely girl that he slowly learned to love.

4 years later…

Amna and 7mood

They got married after mona and fai9al did and now they have 2 boys. One is 2 years old and the other one is a new born.

5alid and ghada

Ghada delivered a healthy baby girl who is now 5 years old. After it she gave birth to a boy and then a girl. 5alid is happy that he is a father to 3 children.

Fai9al and mona

Fai9al and mona still teased eachother but were happily married. She just gave birth to twins. A boy and a girl.

Shamma and ali

Shamma is 8 months pregnant with a baby boy. She complains of back aches and her huge belly. While ali stands her complains but loves her anyways.
This is the end of the journey of the characters. I hope you liked ending.

THE END

3eedkm embarak

3eedkm  embarak o kil 3am o entow eb5air o eb alf 9e77a o salama insllah. Inshalla intow mestanseen fi 3eedkm o em3aydeen wayid.


My 3idya to you is the final part of For You For Eternity. Im sorry if you thought it was short wila not what you wanted to be, i just hope you enjoyed the same way i enjoyed writting it with the support of all my readers. The story is ending im comming with a new story so dont worry. The new story's title is: Could This Be love?


I hope you are enjoying your eid


-with all my love <3

Monday, August 29, 2011

For You For Eternity 70


Im too excited to post this part wallah, i want to read your comments telling mea bout your reactions please :) enjoy


PART 70

Amna’s point of view:

The day has finaly come. It was time for us to graduate. We got dressed and went to graduation. The whole process went by quickly. This graduation felt like a farewell party. After 3 days is my flight. I still didn’t tell the girls. Ill tell them later now is not the right time. After graduation I started to pack secretely without telling any body. I avoided 7mood the whole time. I never said I word to him after. This is actually for the best.

The days passed by quickly and my flight is tomorrow at 10:00 AM. I had to tell ghada and mona about it.

Amna: im leaving tomorrow

Both of them: WHAT??

Amna: listen Rashid already left and I have to leave to ok, this is for the best, 
I booked so no one can change my mind

Ghada: amna don’t you think you are being stupid

Amna: la2 mob stupid this is for the best ok you have to listen to me, I have to do this

Mona: rly so you are going and we are not going to see you ever again

Amna: its ok ill visit

Ghada: amna please

Amna: nooo don’t beg please, because tomorrow is the flight at 10:00 AM and im not changing my mind. Im going to the airport alone. I don’t want anyone to come with me and try to change my mind. Ok my mind is made.

Ghada’s point of view:

This is finaly happening. She is leaving I actually knew deep down that is going to leave. She wont stay here and bare with all of this. She made up her mind and no one can stop her. She insisted that this is goodbye. But mona and I are going to her in the morning for our proper good byes before she leaves.

7mood’s point of view:

I just heard that tomorrow is her flight. She is really leaving. And I cant do anything about it. Im married to a girl that i maybe got pregnant. All I did was sit and think. Get lost in my deep thoughts.

Mona’s point of view:

I woke up extra early this time because ghada and I wanted to go to amna for the finaly good bye. I washed up got dressed and headed downstairs this is weird. There was no breakfast at the table.

Mona: rosa y no breakfast?

Rosa (the maid): oh sry mona but I didn’t make breakfast today

Mona: its ok ill get something out of the fridge

I opened to find it empty. What the hell it wasn’t restocked.

Mona: the fridge is empty?

Rosa: because madam didn’t give me money to restock it, you know the problem going on

Mona: problem??

Rosa: ohh I have to go

Mona: rosa tell me NOW

Rosa: you don’t know I hear mama and baba talking about problem in company no money

What the hell is going on. Sho no money?? The company was broke and my parents didn’t tell me. How did this happen? Its like they don’t include me in anything, my own families problems I don’t know. The maid does and I don’t.
I met up with ghada to go to ghada’s parents house where we saw amna all dressed up and ready to leave. She was saying goodbye to ghada’s mom and dad.

Ghada’s dad: bnti deeerii balch 3ala 3mrch enzain

Amna: inshallah 3ami

Ghada’s dad: law ‘3ayartii raych 3adi ma3endna man3 et3arfeen hatha elshay 9a7

Ghada’s mom: haih 7abeebti, 7ayaach

Amna’s point if view:

It was time for me to leave I said my good byes and head to the airport. I didn’t see 7mood and I didn’t get to say goodbye. It is for the best. He is married after all.  I should forget him and move on. This is my first step to forgetting him.

Ghada’s point of view:

Mona, 5alid, fai9al and I were sitting in a coffee shop when Rashid showed up.

Rashid: I need to talk to you guys

Ghada: Rashid?? Amna told me that you left to austrailia yesterday?

Rashid: I couldn’t go before I told the truth, I thought that I should ran away but after looking at amna I couldn’t handle it

Mona: what the hell is going on?

Rashid: its about sara, she is not really pregnant, the documents are fake and she bribed the doctor

Ghada: and you show us this now, 7mood is already married to that bitch

Rashid: im sorry I really am but I didn’t know what to do, I was part of it

It turned out that Rashid knew about it all along. Sara parents helped sara with it because she would end up married to 7mood. And knowing that he is my dad’s son, he would have money. Rashid apologized and left.

Ghada: abaaih amoon fil airport I have to call her before she leaves

I tried calling but her phone is off

Ghada: shit is not answering

Mona: call 7mood NOW

I called 7mood he picked up the phone, I told him to rush to the airport before its too late. He told him the story quickly so that he could catch up with amna before she leaves.

7mood’s point of view:

After hearing what ghada said my mind just stopped thinking. The next thing I knew I was doing, I was  in my car driving headed to the airport. I pressed on the gas as much as I can. I ran into the airport but her flight said that it already departed. No this cant be happening im going to take a flight there.

7mood: aloo ghadoo elflight mal amna esa3a 10:00

Ghada: yes did you find her?

7mood: la2 it departed already

Ghada: 7mood tara amna is in a transition flight, she didn’t want to go 14 hours to Australia so she will stop in Singapore for 2 nights then go to Australia

7mood: ok im taking a flight to asutralia then bye

Mona’s point of view:

Ghada: he just hang up on me and told me that he is leaving to Singapore

Mona: wat?

Ghada: that is what he just said

Fai9al: enzain 5alid n7n e7een 3dna 8a’6ia 9a7?

5alid: haih bs manseer elma7kama, baseer ana akalm obooha

Fai9al: enzain benzay’3a ena benerfa3 3alaih 8a’6eeya, beyzee’3  3ala efloos’h

5alid: haih baseerlh elyoom bs fai9al 3a6nii elawraag mal elbankaccounts

Fai9al: enzain tarahm fil maktab ba5ali Ali eyeebhm

They discussed everything and it seemed fine. Every thing is going back to normal. But after hearing all of this I remembered that my parents kept everything from me. How can they do this to me.

Mona: im sorry but i have to go

I started to walk to my car.

Ghada: wait mona, fai9al go after her

Fai9al got up and walked towards me.

Fai9al: mona whats wrong?

Mona: whats right? Ha my parents are broke instead of talking to me about it they decided to keep it form me and force me to get married. Who does that, im their daughter they are suppose to tell me those things. It is like I don’t belong with them. I had to find out through the maid. The maid, she knew and I didn’t. I don’t belong anywhere, and in 5 months is my wedding, im married to a guy inm friends with, I have to go

I cant believe I just said that, but I have to let it out. I got in my car and drove off.

Fai9al’s point of view:

She is upset and I have no idea why. I went back to ghada.

Fai9al: 5alid already left

Ghada: yeah he had things to do, before he goes to sara’s father, whats wrong with mona?

Fai9al: madreebha she suddenly blew up on me and left

Ghada: you idiot

Fai9al: what idiot? What did I do?

Ghada: cant you see she loves you

Fai9al: why is everybody saying that

Ghada: excuse me, didn’t you hear me I said she loves you, I know that you love her too, what are you doing here go to her, I see the way you look at her

Ghada’s words suddenly sank in. she was right I had to go to her. I tired her house but the maid told me that she is not there.

Fai9al: where is she?

Rosa: mr.fai9al I don’t know she took keys to mizra2a and go

Fai9al: ohh mizra3a, ok thank you

She went to their mizra3a, the place she goes to when she wants to be 
alone. I found her sitting in the couch lost in her thoughts.

She looked up to me and saw me looking at her

Mona: what are you doing here?

Fai9al: you belong with me...












Amna’s point if view:

I arrived at the Singapore airport and I rested for 2 hours freshened up and went out. I decided to go to universal studios. I know it is not the best thing to do so that I can move on. But I had to go. I want to remember the first date we had. I roomed around the place for another 2 hours and went to the spot where we shared our first kiss. Today felt different I miss him I really do.




7mood: I knew that you are going to be here...

Sunday, August 28, 2011

For You For Eternity 69


PART 69

Mona’s point of view:

Mona: jassim is every-






Jassim: mona I love you





Mona: ohh jassim im married, an-

Jassim: I know that but I had to let it out, I told you I don’t expect anything from it but I had to tell you, ive been in love with you ever since I laid eyes on you

Mona: im so sorry jassim but im inlove with my husband. I actually love him 
but he doesn’t know that anyway I have to go now

Jassim: mona listen I don’t want you thinking about this, just let it go ok

Why do I feel really bad right now. I had to tell ghada. We were meeting up in a coffee shop with 5alid and fai9al. 5alid and fai9al weren’t there yet.

I told ghada everything, I had to let it out.

Ghada: omg so jassim told you that he loves you

Mona: ghada what is wrong with me, someone like jassim told me that he loves but no im inlove with my husband who I got married to agreeing on being friends. Who does that?

Ghada: ohh mona im sorry so you love him don’t you?

Mona: mob bs love im inlove with him

Fai9al’s point of view:

We agreed to gather in this coffee shop. The girls were there already. There were so into their conversation that they didn’t notice me walking towards them. I heard a little of their conversation

Ghada: omg so jassim told you that he loves you

I freezed in my spot and walked right back outside. What the fu… was that. Doesn’t that son of a.. know that she is married. She is my wife for god sakes.
I found him smoking near the parking of the university.

Fai9al: mat3arf enha metzawja yali matesti7i 3ala wayhk

Jassim: fai9al e9br

Fai9al: la e9br wala shay, hii 7eremtii o etgoolaha enk et7ibha wain yalseen n7n

Jassim: haih 7remtk bs hi galatlii inha et7ib 7ad thanii

Fai9al: SHOOOO?

Jassim; hi galatli enha et7bk inth

What the hell is going on. So she said that she loves me. She said she loves me. Wait I cant register this in my mind yet. She loves me. She is my wife and she loves me. I have to tell her before something like this happenes again. But I don’t know when to tell her.

Shamma’s point of view:

I woke up a bit late this morning. Mona was already here making lunch. I totally forgot that today ali is coming. It slipped my mind.

Shamma: wha the hell are you doing here?

Ali: tara mob chi eyra7boon bel’6yoof

Shamma: not funny

Ali: I wasn’t trying to be funny

Shamma: im serious

Ali: sho tbain, your mom invited me sho matbainii barawi7

Shamma: ohh la sry, btw sorry for being mean last night, I was pissed of that at the driver

Ali: yeah I heard, btw you handled the situation greatly hahaha


Shamma: (just gave him the stare)

Saturday, August 27, 2011

Good News

I was going to tell you guys this on eid as a 3idya but i had to answer bint almehairi's question.


She asked if i would complete after this story. And yes i would. i actually thought about the next story and after this one im going to start posting the other one. 


But not directly ofcourse im going to give you guys a little break and myself for about 1 week untill eid is over and for universoty stuff so...


For you for eternity is going to end after 3 parts. The Finale part is going to be part 71, so i hope you are enjoying this and i cant wait for you guys to read my next one.

For You For Eternity 68


PART 68

Amna’s point of view:

Amna: ab’3ii akalmch ebsh’3la

Ghada’s mom: 6ab3an kalmeenii 3adii b’3aitii shay

Amna: ana agoolch enii aba aseer  austrailia o a3eesh ehnaak wiya 3ami

Ghada’s mom: laish mob merta7a ehnii?

Amna: la mob chii bs tara Rashid beyrid ehnaak o 3ami ehnaak o kil shay fa glt baseer, 3ami roo7a yebanii aseer ehnaak

Ghada’s mom: et3arfeen eni maba5aleech etsaween shay matebainh, bs law 8arartii ench tbain etemmeen enhii intii 7ayaach 7abeebti

I don’t want to deal with the whole 7mood thing. It is the best thing to do right now. I should leave. I have to sort my things out first. so after graduation by 3 days. I should go book my flight and everything. If I don’t do it now I know ill change my mind. For the moment I wont tell the girls because I know they will only let me change my mind. And it is not something I want right now.

7mood’s point of view:

I came back home and found my mom waiting for me. God this is not the time for another lecture.

Ghada’s mom: m7md tara el3rs esboo3 3gb elgraduation enzain

7mood: enzain umai, b’3atii shay thanii?

Ghada’s mom: la2

Uff 1 week after grauation is the end of my life. So this is why sara kept on calling. I don’t want anything to do with the party or wedding or what ever. All I have to do is show up.

Fai9al’s point of view:

What am I going to do 7mood is not even paying attention to anything. I just leanred that the wedding is 1 week from now. He is like a body walking without a soul in it. Im running out of time. But just like ghada said there is nothing we can do. I cant watch my best friend like this.

Fai9al: umai tara 3li beyet’3ada 3edna

Fai9al’s mom: 7ayaallah 7abeebi


(by the way Ali is fai9al’s close friend form work. They started to get closer and now they are good friends. Ali’s mom knows fai9al’s mom. They are friends too. Ali is an average looking guy. But he is nice.)

Shamma’s point of view:

Mona and I went shopping. We kind of bought a lot of things. Since mona is getting married to fai9al, she needs a lot of things.

Mona walked inside the house while I stood outside gathered a couple of things.

Shamma: raju ya3nii bet5aleenii ana ashl kil shay

Raju (the driver): mama ana choof intii shil a’3raad

Shamma: sho ana shil int’h eli lazm etshil, asht’3l 3ndk ana ‘uff hatha elderaiwal beyethba7nii’

I started walking when I hit this hard thing.

Shamma: ayyyyy

Guy: asf et3awartii?

Shamma: 6ab3an et3awart 3ashan chii glt ayy, choof wain temshii

Guy: enti eli de3amteenii

Shamma: ana mob metfayja enzain o hatha baitii ent’h sho etsawii ehnii

He just kept on looking at me. What the hell is wrong with this guy. I don’t even know who he is. Im already in a pissed off mood.

I went inside the house when my mom told me that one of fai9al’s friends are commig and he is also her close friend’s son.

Ali: esalam 3alikm

All: wa3alaikm esalam

Shamma: ‘shit this is him’

I pulled mona to a room and told her everything.

Mona: omg you didn’t just do that

Shamma: sho tbanii asawii? Blame PMS

Mona: ay PMS ay 5arabee6 intii dayman chi, look ma7ad galch

Shamma: you know this is not helping

Mona: ohh come on he is not even going to remember it, yallah they are waiting for us

Shamma: ok fine

We went to the dinning table where they all got seated. I just sat there next to mona silent.

Fai9al’s mom: ali 7abeebi lazm etii bacher ba3ad tet’3ada enhii

Ali: la 3amo allah eysalmch, maba ala3wizkm

Fai9al: mn meta estwait test7ii?

Fai9al’s mom: hahaha haih la ma la3waztna wala shay, bacher mona bete6ba5

Fai9al: haih 6ab3an mafi a7san mn 6ab5 7remtii

Mona: (giggle) ali lazm etjarb 6ab5ii

Ali: wala eyhmch ‘why is she not even talking, she seems embarassed’

Mona’s point of view:

Graduation is tomorrow I cant wait. Im really exhausted of university. I cant wait to be done with it finally. I was sitting with some group of friends. It was our last few days together. Im going to miss everyone. I was about to get in my car when I heard jassim calling my name.

Jassim: mona

Mona: oh jassim hey how r you?

Jassim: im good you?

Mona: el7emdillah so whats up?

Jassim: I just want to tell you something

Mona: yeah is something wrong?

Jassim: no no nothing is worng , umm I know that you are married already, I know that but I have to tell you before graduation, I don’t expect anything but I have to let it out before graduation, because after I know that I wont see you again

Mona: jassim is every-







Jassim: mona I love you...

Friday, August 26, 2011

For You For Eternity 67

Sorry if it is short just be patient please, i hope you are enjoying my story


PART 67

Ghada’s point of view:

Fai9al showed up at the apartment with mona.

Mona: I swear that is what she said

Ghada: yeah but what does that mean?

Mona: I don’t know, but someone crazy like sara would do anything don’t you 
think?

Fai9al: madrii this is getting more confusing, 5alid beykoon 3dna case?

5alid: case 7ag shoo, roo7na man3arf sho mestiwi

Fai9al: haih bs ‘3areeba law elwa7id beyda5el n9 malioon mara wi7dh

5alid: adrii bs ba3adh elcase fii wayid 7efar

Fai9al: 7asbiyalla 3ala eblees

Amna’s point of view:

Graduation is after tomorrow. finally I would be free from university. I got a phone call from Rashid. I haven’t talked to him in a long time. With everything that happened.

Amna: aloo hala rahsid

Rashid: hala amoona, sh7alch?

Amna: ana eb5air el7emdillah

Rashid: el7emdillah agool goomi etlabesai bene6la3

Amna; yeah sure ill just get dressed

He picked me up and we went to sit in some coffee shop.

Rashid: b’3ait agoolch shay

Amna: what’s wrong?

Rashid: oh no nothing is wrong its just that Im going back to Australia

Amna: why?

Rahsid: I don’t know, I have nothing here and all my family is back there so..

Amna: ohh when are you going?

Rashid:  the day after tomorrow. right after your graduation

Amna: ohh have a safe flight salem 3ala 3ami and everybody there

Rashid: allah eysalmch

He is leaving which gave me an idea. And this idea turned into me making my mind. 5ala9 ill stick to it. It is something I have to do.

Amna: hala 3amo jameela how is your day?

Ghada’s mom; hala 7abeebti amna, elyoom zain bs eshway ta3bana mn elsaira 
wil rada

Amna: ab’3ii akalmch ebsh’3la

Ghada’s mom: 6ab3an kalmeenii 3adii b’3aitii shay

Amna: ana b'3ait agoolch enii aba aseer  austrailia o a3eesh ehnaak wiya 3ami