Friday, July 1, 2011

For You For Eternity 2

PART 2


The words that are between '' is wat the character is thinking and i made it in another color to distinguish what they are thinking from what they are saying.

Ghada: mama amoon is coming

Ghada’s mom: 7ayaha allah

Calling amna

Ghada: ha amoon wain entii

me: ana jdam baitkm efthoo elbaab

Ghada: 7mood go open the door

7mood: ok

I went down the car and so 7mood opening the door for me…

7mood: 7ata fi baitna lazm achoofch

Me: wa3alaikm elsalam, enth s7alch? tara esalam mob 7aram

Yep that was our relationship like tom and jerry

7mood: hhh ‘she is looking rly pretty these days, stop 7mood sho yas etgool’ asf asf ha sh7alch? a7een  a7san?

Me: yes much better (cheeky smile)

I went in the house and spend my dad the way I spend it all the time, we go out talk shop and other things. Then we head back home

Ghada: amoon dgii 7ag ahalch o gooleelhm ena betbatain e7nii

Me: haih ok sleep over anything not to spend more time in tht torture place of a house

Ghada knew what was going with me and my family, I told her everything and she did aswell

Ghada: ohhh did u see tht guy tht was checking you out

Me: ohh plz he was looking at me cz u were standing right next to you

Ghada: hahhaha awanna etnakteen ba3ad (ghada knew tht ana ma3endii halswalf, I dnt care for attention or boyfriends or whatever, she ddnt either she had a boyfriend once but they ddnt work out bcz he cheeted on her so she broke up with him)

Me: haih asho tethasbain anakt o n9
After that I called my mom she didn’t pick up called my sister she didn’t pick up as well and neither did my dad. I called my dad again and I heard a strange voice coming from the other side of the phone

Me: alo

Strange voice: alo esalam 3alaikm

Me: w3laikm esalam, umm a’6anii meta9la ra8am ‘3ala6 asfh e5oy

Strange voice: la e5tii ana mn elshr6a, entii bent 3mr elX ?

Me: haih na3am, laish sho mestiwii?


After that I felt like a statue I don’t know what happened to me, the next thing I knew I was in the hospital with 3amo jameela and 3ami ahmed (ghada and 7mood’s parents) that moment felt numb. That exact moment is when the police told me that I lost both of my parents and my only sister in a car crash. 

1 comment:

  1. i really like your story so far. you're doing really great, im saying this for two reasons 1) because i really like it and 2) because i want to encourage you to continue we need more bloggers and writers before this blog-sphere dies out.

    one thing you need to do is proofread you have a little to many mistakes. it's okay for that to happen, but it would be a little easier for your reader to understand.

    keep it up with all my love bint almehairi

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