Friday, October 21, 2011

Could This Be Love? 54

i know that you will love this post, yesterday i asked for your comments because i want to know your opinions about how i write. myself i get bored reading about one character, so i want to focus on more characters, and the couples in the story. ENJOY :)



PART 54

His grip on her arm got stronger to prevent her from leaving him, he wouldn’t take it anymore

S3ood: HOW CAN I WHEN SHE STANDING RIGHT INFRONT OF ME

Marwa stoped struggling with s3ood and froze in her place, s3ood just got closer to her and and back hugged her tightly. He wrapped his arms around her and whispered right beside her ear

S3ood: why cant you see that im inlove with you

The next day…

3li: nawarii you ready?

Noora: 3alawii im nervous, maybe this is a bad idea, what if they hate me, 3li no please

3li: noora… (he held her face with both his hands and kissed her forhead), trust me

All noora could do was nod, they rang the bell and went in. noora was amazed with the huge entrance, his parents house was hug with made her even more nervous that she ever was. She tightened her grip on 3li’s hand and entered the house. 3li’s family where very elegant which made noora even more nervous. 3li had a younger brother that was a year younger than him. He attended the same university as they all do and he is in first year. His name is Fahad. He also has a younger sister that is 12 years old. And her name is Arwa. They were only 3 siblings. Unlike 3li, fahad had the features of his dad more than his mom. He had the dark skin and the sharp features. But arwa looked just like 3li and their mother. Her skin was white and her hair was a light colour of brown. She is very pretty mashallah. Noora looked around the place looking for 3li’s mom.

Fahad: we finally meet

Noora: indeed, its really nice meeting you

Arwa: so you are in your first year?

Noora: yes, it is actually my first time to visit Australia

3li: so where is mom?

They were used talking in English with their Australian accent because of their mother.

Fahad: she is in the kitchen

Noora: your mom cooks?

Arwa: she likes it a lot, she hates it when the maids do all the work, especially the cooking

Noora just giggeled, she thought that their mother would anything but what she heard so far.

3li’s mom: ohhh hiiiii there sorry im a mess (she was wearing an apron)

3li: mom this is noora

3li’s mom: it so good to finally meet you, we heard a lot about you, haven’t we kids

His mom had the whitest skin you could ever see with her light brown hair and petite features. She looked young and very bubbly.

Fahad and arwa just agreed with what she said, and 3li had the embarrassed look on his face.

3li’s mom : so you’re the pretty girl that took my boys heart

Noora: its really nice meeting you mrs. Al X

3li’s mom: ohhh no you don’t have to call me that, its just too formal call me Jennifer (that was her name)

Noora: so you cook? Id love to try your food, 3li tells me that your cakes taste amazing

3li’s mom: ohh he is just being modest, so do you cook

Noora: im learning actually, my best friend bakes amazing cakes

3li’s mom: that is great, how about you come over and ill teach you

Noora: that would be wonderfull

3li’s mom: Ok lets sit down have lunch

They sat down and had a great lunch, noora was glad that she did this. 3li was everything she ever wanted. His family was really great. They talked about everything and laughed like noora wasn’t a guest.

In 3abdl3zeez building...

3abdl3zeez was on his way to his apartment when he saw shamma getting out of hers. She had her laundry basket with her. She just walked passed him and ignored him without a single word. She made her way down to the laundry room and placed her cloths inside the washing room and waited right infront of it.

3abdl3zeez was really pissed that he couldn’t handle it anymore. He marched into the laundry room with a furious look on his face.

3abdl3zeez: what is wrong with you?

Shamma: me?? What is wrong with you?

3abdl3zeez: so your just going to reask me the questions I ask you!!!

Shamma: 3abdl3zeez im sick of this ok, if you want to say something than say it!!

Shamma noticed that his facial expression changed into a sad one, she never saw this look on his face before so she was worried.

3abdl3zeez: why is it so hard for you to notice?

Shamma just looked at him with a blank face, she had no idea where this was going… she was kind of nervous

3abdl3zeez: I cant so this anymore, I cant, your everywhere, if your not in my mind at night you are in my thoughts the moment I wake up, when im on my way to campus, when im having breakfast, lunch and dinner, even before I go to sleep… (he let out a big sigh) why do you do this to me

Shamma expression totally changed, she has a mixture of expressions, some of them where shocked and some were what she hadnt felt before, at that moment she wanted to go up to him and hug him.

3abdl3zeez: answer me, why do you do this to me?

He started to move closer to shamma, with every step he took made shamma even more nervous and tingly inside, he finally stood right in front of her and shamma froze in her place she couldnt escape because the washing machine was right behind her and he had his hands on the washing machine trapping her right infornt of him with their faces few inches away from each other.

3abdl3zeez: im inlove with you and I cant do anything about

Shamma reaction completely turned to shocked, she didn’t know where to look but then her eyes landed right on 3abdl3zeez eyes. She was worried if he came any closer he would sense her heart pounding like it would come out of her chest. His face strated moving closer and closer his lips was only 1 centimeter away from hers. Her eyes slowly moved from his eyes to him lips. She slowly shut her eyes and felt his lips on hers.

2 comments:

  1. Please please please 76y another post w FINALLY

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  2. A5eeran he told her!!!
    i reaaaally loved this post!!

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