Tuesday, August 30, 2011

For You For Eternity 71 Finale


im rly sad that this story ended but all story has to end right. i dont mean to brag but im proud of myself on finishing a whole story. hope you like it and enjoy :)

PART 71

Amna’s point if view:

I arrived at the Singapore airport and I rested for 2 hours freshened up and went out. I decided to go to universal studios. I know it is not the best thing to do so that I can move on. But I had to go. I want to remember the first date we had. I roomed around the place for another 2 hours and went to the spot where we shared our first kiss. Today felt different I miss him I really do.

7mood: I knew that you are going to be here

Amna: 7mood? What are you doing here

the moment i saw him the tears found their way down my cheeks, i miss him ive always imganed his face in my mind. Never has one second pass without me thinking of him.

7mood: I followed you to the airport but you already left, so I took the first flight to here I went to your hotel but they told me that you weren’t there so I came here and waited for you here

The moment he showed up I knew that everything is ok, everything is fine. After hearing him say that I just ran to him and hugged him. I missed him, I missed his smile his face his smell. Everything about him.

Amna: I love you

7mood: I love you more

Fai9al’s point of view:

She went to their mizra3a it the place she goes to when she wants to be alone. I found here sitting in the couch lost in her thoughts.
She looked up to me and saw me looking at her

Mona: what are you doing here?

Fai9al: you belong with me

Mona: fai9-

Fai9al: mona wait, you belong with me, I love the way you don’t hide who you are, you eat like there is no tomorrow and express the way you love food, I love the way you are not a typical girl and hate chick flicks, i love you...

Mona:…

Fai9al: I know this is a shock and I know that you love me too

She came up to me and kissed me on the lips.

7mood’s point of view:

Everything is ok, I decided to spend the 2 nights with her here. We had our first date all over again. I love her I really do.

Shamma’s point of view:

I was at home chillig, it was kind of a boring day. I called some friends but they were busy eli emsafra and stuff. I saw ali walking in the living room, shit I look like crap. Since when do I care about how I look for ali.

Ali: esalam 3alaikm

Shamma: wa3alikm esalam, umm fai9al mob ehnii

Ali: ohh tara hoo galii ayeeb hal awraag ehnii

Shamma: enzain ana ba36eeh eyah

Ali: mashkoora shamma (million dollar smile)

Shamma: el3afow (blush)

Shit did I just blush.

Ali: 'she is very cute when she blushes'

Mona’s point of view:

Fai9al and I were on the couch cuddling watching TV when he received a phone call from shamma.

Fai9al: ohh nsait elawraag enzain a7een bayee (he hung up)

Mona: ok lets go

Fai9al: re’6aitii?

Mona: im gonna let me make it up to you some other time, we have 5 months

Fai9al just laughed

We kissed and went out the door to his house. I love him I really do.

5 months later

(this is me talking not any of the characters)

Mona: omg im nervous a7is enni bamoot

Ghada: sho nervous remember that every bride should be confident

Mona: well I just lied to get you to calm down

Ghada: manoo tara ana ‘6ahrii ey3awernii chub o yalla lazm enseer

Yes it was mona’s wedding and ghada is already 5 months pregnant. She has this little baby bump.

Amna: ok people come down mona we got to go

Shamma: abaaih shaklch wayid 7lew fa9ool beymoot hehehe

Mona: rly?

Ghada: since when are you like this yallah lets go so you can see your fai9al goomii

After the constant arguing mona finaly agreed to go on stage. She looked beautiful all girls envied her while she walked towards the stairs of the stage. She walked gracefully until she took a seat and watched her friends and family dance.

Shamma’s point of view:

Being the sister of the groom actually makes you take responsibility hehehe. Oh well. I like moving a lot in weddings I hate sitting in one place. I walked to the kitchen to see if everything is ready. There was ali talking over the phone. I felt weird the moment I saw him. He closed the phone and walked towards where I was standing.

Ali: hala shamma sh7alch?

Shamma: ana eb5air el7emdillah int’h?

Ali: el7emdillah

Shamma: I hope your enjoying the wedding, excuse me I have to go in now

Ali: yeah im enjoying it, btw you look beautifull (he walked away)

Did he just say that. Omg im blushing.

Amna: oh shamma what are you doing out here

Shamma: ohh amna im going in now, ok ill see in

Amna’s point of view:

I went out just by chance I run into 7mood.

7mood: hey there beautifull you taken?

Amna: yes cant you see im engaged (I showed him the ring)

Yes you got it right 7mood and I are engaged and our wedding is after 4 months.

7mood: ohh so I lost my chances ha?

Amna: yes you did, im happily engaged to my fiancé

7mood: that lucky bastard

Amna: ofcourse he is lucky

7mood: I love you

Amna: I love you more

Back inside the hall….

Shamma got tired of walking here and there so she sat down

Ali’s mom: hala bntii intii shamma e5t elme3rs 9a7?

Shamma: hala feech 5alo, haih na3am ana e5t elme3rs

Ali’s mom: ana um ali

Shamma: allah eysalmch 5alo, sh7alch, inshallah mestansa

Ali’s mom: mnstansa 7abeebti mashkoora

Shamma made a good impression on ali’s mom little did shamma know that ali asked his mom to meet shamma.

It was time for the men to come in. In the lead was fai9al and family and friends behind him. Fai9al walked up the stage towards mona. He kissed her forhead.

Mona: (whisper) I love you

Fai9al: (whispered back) I love you more

They sat next to each other while he held her hand, and every one came up to congratulate them.

Somewhere between the crowd…

5alid: how is my wife and baby?

Ghada: they are very fine el7emdillah

5alid places his hand on her belly and sighed.

5alid: ba3adnii mob rayim a9adig enni bastiwi obow

Ghada: well believe it

5alid: I love you

Ghada: I love you more

And that is how everything ended. Everyone got their happy ending. Except for sara. If your wondering sara ended marrying some rich guy that her family forced to marry. Now she married to him and god knows what happened to her. While Rashid went back to Australia and stayed there this time working. Jassim on the other hand got married to a lovely girl that he slowly learned to love.

4 years later…

Amna and 7mood

They got married after mona and fai9al did and now they have 2 boys. One is 2 years old and the other one is a new born.

5alid and ghada

Ghada delivered a healthy baby girl who is now 5 years old. After it she gave birth to a boy and then a girl. 5alid is happy that he is a father to 3 children.

Fai9al and mona

Fai9al and mona still teased eachother but were happily married. She just gave birth to twins. A boy and a girl.

Shamma and ali

Shamma is 8 months pregnant with a baby boy. She complains of back aches and her huge belly. While ali stands her complains but loves her anyways.
This is the end of the journey of the characters. I hope you liked ending.

THE END

6 comments:

  1. Such an amazing Ending <3
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  2. i did read your story i commented ba3ad, i read it before i posted the finale, im glad that you liked the ending :)

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  3. Loved it <3 cant wait 7g el new storyyy !!!:P
    Keep hal amazing work ! W btw thanks 3al happy ending ;D

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  4. el3afow ana ebroo7i i like happy endings :)

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  5. Good job dear
    I mentioned this before and I will do again. The flow of the story was amazing. Waiting to read more of you work

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  6. @maria: thank you, i tried my best to make the flow perfect and so that the story would make sence :) my new story is comming soon just wait a but more

    -love you all

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