Thursday, August 25, 2011

For You For Eternity 66


PART 66

7mood’s point of view:

Its final im a married man. Sara keeps on calling me but I never pick the phone. I went back home and saw sara there with my mother sitting. What the f… is she doing here.

Ghada’s mom: m7md sara ehnii

I just ignored them and left to my room. I agreed to marry her but that doesn’t mean I have to like it. This is messed up. I cant think I cant. All I think about is amna. I need her right now. I cant stop thinking about her.

Ghada’s mom: m7md!! Knt aramsk sara radat elbait

7mood: umai sho tbainii asawii gltow atwajaha o etzawajta, mayestiwi et’3a9boonii a7ibha

Ghada’s mom: m7md sho tbanii asawii elbint 7amel

7mood: mabet9adgeenii law gtlch eni ana masawait shay, ana mob elsbab ena hi 7amel

Ghada’s mom: bs hii 3ndha awraag o hatha eli ent’h etsawii 9a7, mayestiwi et5ali elbint etwalii

My mom left. She is disappointed and so is my dad. How did all this happen. I really need amna right now.

I knocked on her door to find her already asleep. I didn’t want to waker her up so I just left to my room.

Amna’s point of view:

I heard a knock on my door. The room was dark. 7mood stepped in I immediately closed my eyes. I knew it was him. So I pretended that I was asleep. because if I look at him right now I might hug him and then we might cuddle. I cant do that it not fair to any of us.

Mona’s point of view:

I was in uni when I bumped into this girl I know. It was aisha sara’s friend.

Mona: aisha?

Aisha: mona?

Mona: listen I know that you were the one who answered the phone

Aisha: ahh…

Mona: tell me about sara, I know she is your friend but if you care about her you will tell me the truth

Aisha: I don’t know anything

Mona: don’t lie to me, you know exactly what I am talking about

Aisha: ok listen what I know is the sara told me that she will do anything to get m7md that is all I know

She just left. What the hell did she mean by that. Is she lying about the pregnancy?

In fai9al’s office:

Ali: fai9al tara ana 7a9ait red flags 3ala elbank account eli 5abartnii 3nh

Fai9al: enzain, bs ana chayakt elbank accounts ma6ela3lii shay

Ali: haih bs ana chayakt bank accounts mal bara3 elblaad

Fai9al: 9dg, et9adg lazm a36eek man9b a3la

Ali: hhh, agool hatha eli etgool 3nh 6ale3 emda5el 500,000 DHS mara wi7dh

Fai9al: e7lif? O kaif 6alla3t hatha kilh

Ali: lates2al, bs et’thakar elman9b

Fai9al: hahah wala eyhmk ya 3low

Now I know for sure the basta.. of a doctor got paid. His bak accounts are constant. But he suddenly adds half a million. I have to talk to ghada and 5alid about this. Something is not right.

Wednesday, August 24, 2011

For You For Eternity 65


PART 65

Ghada’s point of view:

Today is the melcha day. This is going to be one long day. I wore any dress on and head to my parent’s house. I saw my mom talking to amna.

Ghada’s mom: amna bntii yala elbesii fstaanch

Amna: haa um ok a7een

Ghada: mama amna shakelha ta3bana mob lazm etseer elmelcha

Amna: oh la its fine I can go

Ghada’s mom left the room

Ghada: amna its ok if you don’t go

Amna: la2 im going

Ghada: amna don’t do this to yourself

Amna: ghada please

We went to sara’s house. Her mom stood there and greeted us. It was very awkward. Her mom looked so happy while my mom put on fake smiles. My mom had to socialize even though this is the last place she wants to socialize in, she had too. Amna, mona and I stayed sitting waiting for the time to leave. It was time for 7mood to enter the place.

He looked really tired and not up for it. Sara in the other hand was very happy and excited. How can she? She is pregnant out of wedlock what is so happy about it? 7mood made his way up the stage and just sat there. Without kissing her forehead or anything. He looked like a statue up there. We over heard some girls talking

1st:girl: 6a 9dg mob mn 5a6ra
2nd girl: ashkra enna emzawjeenhm ‘3a9b 3asham elefloos

What the hell are people saying. Lahadaraja embayin. Well I cant blame anyone the wedding was rushed.

After all that crap people started to leave and so did we. The whole ride home was quite.

Fai9al’s point of view:

It was the weekend and yesterday was the melcha. 7mood was already a married man. He said nothing and didn’t want to talk about it anymore. All he did was go to university and them back home. Sara would call him but he never took her calls.

This whole pregnant thing was a shock to everybody. It was the weekend and I promised that I would take mona to our mizra3a. so I picked her up and we left to the mizra3a. just the both of us.

Mona’s point of view:

Today is the day that fai9al and I are going to the mizra3a.i thought about it a lot that I actually woke up 5:00 and started packing. I couldn’t sleep. This is what fai9al does to me. As for the swim wear I actually got my bikini. Fai9al is my husband I get to do what ever I want. I want him to look at me as his wife not his friend.

He picked me up and we went to the mizra3a.

Fai9al: here we go, hathi mizra3anta

Mona: mashallah its nice, im excited yallah we will swim first

Faia9l: tawna wa9leen, eli eychoofch eygool esmech’h mon 7remtii

Mona: chub (blush)

Fai9al: ‘haha she is blushing’

Mona: ok lets go to the supermarket im going to make dinner

Fai9al: ohh your gonna cook

Mona: ofcourse ill make you taste the lovely food that your wife can make

Fai9al: ok then yallah lets go now then swim then make the food ok

Mona: sounds like a plan yallah

Shopping with fai9al is kinda fun. I want to get some stuff and he gets the wrong stuff. He keeps adding unnessesary things to the trolley.

Mona: fai9al? sho bensawii fi hatha?

Fai9al: sho cookies hatha, lazm 7alawa

Mona: bete6la3lk karsha 3gb

Fai9al: intii a5er wi7da termseen 3an elkarsha enzain

Mona: chub

Fai9al: afa 7ata fil super market

We paid and left. We hit the pool and I put on my bikini I wanted him to see it. This time it was black. I can feel his stares. I secretly liked it. I started to rub the sunblock.

Fai9al’s point of view:

She is my wife. Yes she is my wife. Im married to her. why do I feel so guilty when I look at her with that bikini on. I actually enjoyed what I was looking at.
After the pool we took a shower and she started to cook. I just sat there staring at her cooking.

Mona: can  you stop staring and come help me cook

Fai9al: I rather stare at you, you look really sexy

Mona: ohh ‘did he just say that’

Fai9al: ok ill help yallah wat should I do?

Mona: cut the 6maa6

Fai9al: enzain yallah lets cut the 6maa6

Mona: chub don’t copy me

Fai9al: asfeen ha im cutting

She kept on telling me to cut the vegetables, we started to laugh and make fun of each other.

Fai9al: 3amdan your giving me the cutting part ha ma5alaitii shay

Mona: well the cutting part is the part that I don’t like so much

Fai9al: so you are using me?

Mona: kinda

Fai9al: ba3aaad

Mona: ok lets do the desert until the steak finishes

Fai9al: yes desert what are we making

Mona: well Sundays I got the icecream lets add fruits and whip cream to it

We started adding fruits chocolate and whip cream she got whip cream on her index finger

Mona: umm pass the tissue please

I don’t know what happened to me, my mind was on shut down again. I 
grabbed her hand and licked the whip cream off of it. She just looked at me. We stayed in that position for what seemed a very long time.

Fai9al: ok I think the food is ready

Mona: yeah ill set the table

We had our dinner.

Mona: so how is dinner?

Fai9al: you are a very good cook, its really good

Mona: ofcourse I am

I just laughed.

Fai9al: ok yallah let go watch a movie

Mona: yeah sure

We decided to watch white chicks. It is hilarious. We ate out Sundays while watching. It was actually a good date. We were watching the movie when I felt this weight on my shoulder. I realized that mona was leaning her head on me.

Tuesday, August 23, 2011

For You For Eternity 64


PART 64

7mood’s point of view:

My melcha is tomorrow and I have nothing to say about it. I cant say no to it because of my family’s reputation. I cant handle this I just cant.

Amna’s point of view:

Tomorrow is 7mood’s melcha I cant stand the thought of him getting married. I don’t know what happened but I know that 7mood wont do that to me. I really need him right now. Ive been stuck in this room and didn’t go out. I need to leave this house to get some air and think.

Ghada’s point of view:

Fai9al came to the apartment again this time mona was there. I had to tell her. she was shocked she didn’t know anything about it.

Fai9al: ana kalamt eldoctor gal sho sara galat o rawanii elawraag, 7amel taraha

Mona: if she is really pregnant then it will be some one else’s baby not 7mood’s that bitch is crazy

Ghada: yeah let me tell this to my parents, they wont care. This is matter of reputations here. If 7mood doesn’t marry her everything will go down in flames

Mona: so now what are we suppose to do?

Ghada: we leave it the way it is, I don’t want to complicate things more than they are, 7mood agreed to it, he gave up, he really thinks that he did it

Fai9al: 5aloonii aseer aramsa

Fai9al’s point of view:

I went with 7mood to their mizra3a to have some time off. I know that he needs it right now.

Fai9al: 7mood met2ked?

7mood: fa9ool sho tebanii asawii lazm atzawajha ma3endii 7al thanii o 5ala9 ana emwafi8 lazm 7ag ahalii

He tried convincing himself that what he is doing is right.

Mona’s point of view:

I didn’t know this was happening. Omg I have to do something. Yes sara’s friend what was her name again aisha. I have her number but I don’t know if it is still hers. We never talked. Its been years now. Let me try it.

Mona: alooo aisha this is mona from high school

Girl: umm la ra8am ‘3ala6 don’t call again

Mona: ok ghada she just hang up on me whoever it was, this girl said ra8am ‘3ala6

Ghada: ohh 3ayal its really ra8am ‘3ala6, 5ala9 mona there is nothing we can do

Mona: ok lets go to amna, I haven’t seen her since it happened

We went to ghada’s parents house. We found amna sitting in her room.

Ghada: hey you feeling better

Amna: yeah I guess


Mona: hey, im sorry I didn’t know earlier

Amna: listen you 2 I said im ok, what happened happened

We sat with her and talked. She seemed ok but distracted most of the time.

Ghada: ok I have to go now cz 5alid is waiting for me

Mona: yeah I gotta go to my mom is going to flip on me

Amna: yeah ok ill see you guys tomorrow

Amna’s point of view:

The girls came over and I know that I have to talk to them. But I don’t know what to feel right now. They kept on telling me that 7mood didn’t do it. I want to forgive him but he is marrying sara. I need to talk to him. Make everything clear before he gets married. I just want him to marry her without having a heavy heart.

7mood came back home looking terrible.

Amna: hey

7mood: ohh hi, amna listen im sorry, I know sorry seems little but I actually don’t remember that night. Ok there I don’t remember I know that I wont do anything to you. I love you

Amna: I love you too but 7mood your getting married tomorrow

7mood: yh…

Amna: listen marry her, I know that you have to listen to your family, moving on takes time but we can do it right

7mood: amna no please


Amna: I have to go to bed goodnight 'i love you'

Monday, August 22, 2011

For You For Eternity 63


PART 63:

7mood’s point of view:

Ghada: uboi tara ho mayet’thakar sho etstiwa

Ghada’s dad: sho mayetthakar? Chay kan sakraan? O ana glt bn7l elmeshklh 7mood betetzawaj sara

7mood: SHOOO???

Ghada’s dad: latetshara6 intii 6aya7tk 3mrk fii hay elmshklh elti lazm et7lh, 
sho beygooloon elnaas ha? Sho beygooloon? Ter’6a enhm eygooloon 3nk rams'h

7mood: maba atzawaj

Ghada’s dad: mob 3ala kaifk, betetzawaj ya3ni betetzawaj elmelcha hal esboo3 yoom el5mees

My dad left pissed off. He didn’t even look at me. Why is this happening to me.

7mood: umai allah ey5aleech, kalmia uboi

Ghada’s mom: m7md sho tbanii asawii, elbnt 7amel w int'h etgool matethakar sho estwa

7mood: bs-

Ghada’s mom: m7md!!! Hatha mob ma95ara lazm etfakr feena n7n o fi sara, hi 7amel o sho elnaas beygooloon

She walked away. They are all disspointed at me. How could I make her pregnant? This cant be. I always thought of marrying amna and having her babies. All that is gone and never going to happen. She hates me and even if she doesn’t how would we end up together. I cant let her wait for me. Maybe my parents are right.

Ghada’s point of view:

What the hell is going on. I have to fix this I just have to. I should go check up on amna. See how she is doing. Thank god it is the weekend.

Ghada: hey amna

I saw her fixing her room. That is what she always does whenever she is upset. She gets obsessed with cleaning. She made her bed but insisted that her bed wasn’t made properely so she made it again.

Ghada: are you ok?

Amna: no I am not ok, I have to clean everything its messy

Ghada: amna wallah it is not messy please stop

Amna: no I cant stop ok I cant st- (she started to sob)

I couldn’t stand the look of her. I cant see my best friend like this I have to do something. I should go talk to fai9al.

Fai9al’s point of view:

After shopping we went back home and let me tell you if I see another dress im going to throw up.  My phone rang it was ghada.

Ghada: aloo fai9al

Fai9al: hala ghada, sh7alch

Ghada: ana eb5air bs 7mood la2

Fai9al: bismillah 7mood balah?

Ghada: ta3al elshiqqa ebser3a 3ashan a5aberk

Bismillah era7maan era7eem, sho balah 7mood. I hurried to ghada and 5alid’s apartment.

She told me everything.

Fai9al: sho meta kila ha estiwa?

Ghada: madrii fai9al, 7mood yekser el5a6er ma3arf sho asawii

Fai9al: bs sho negdar ensawii?

Ghada: ana a3arf e5oy maeysaweeha

Fai9al: enzain ana baseer 3nd hal doctor eli sara saratla o bachoof shoelsalfa enzain

Ghada: enzain but try to find something I cant look at 7mood and amna like this please

I went to the doctor’s office and I talked to him.

Fai9al: you are sara’s doctor?

Dr.: yes I am why are you asking?

Fai9al: are you sure she is pregnant?

Dr.: we did some tests and yes she is pregnant I can show you the paper work

Something is not right. This doesn’t seem right. First why would sara’s parents allow this marriage? Aren’t they concerned of their own daughter.
I went back to my office and pulled some strings to get that doctor’s bank accounts. But he was clean. Something is not right and I can feel it.

Sunday, August 21, 2011

For You For Eternity 62


PART 62

Mona’s point of view:

It was time for me and shamma to go shopping. I just remembered fai9al is commig. What should I wear. I want to look good for him but not seem that im tryig really hard. I decided to put on my dark skinny jeans with my white loose blouse. I left my hair open, well its is short there is nothing else to do with it. I out on my white flats and went out the door. Fai9al was coming any second. My mom wanted them to come in a bit before we head to the mall.

Shamma: hi we are here

Mona: hi shamma you look great come on in

Shamma: thnx, well you look hot kila ha 7ag fa9ool

Mona: (blush) ‘shit I can feel my cheeks burning’

Fai9al: esalam 3alaikm, sh7alch mona?

Mona: wa3alaikm esalam ana eb5air el7emdillah what about u?

Fai9al: el7emdillah

We sat for a bit then went to look for dresses. Shamma spotted this orange one that she really liked.

Mona: omg it looks so hot go try on come on

Shamma: really?

Faia9l: 3anebow elaho fistaan seeri o jarbii fkeenii

Mona: are you gonna be like this the whole time

Fai9al: asf asf ana baylis ehnii batrayaalkm

Shamma went in to try on the dress. She came out looking like a godess. It fitted her perfectly. Just that it needs to be shorter a bit and need to be tightened. Shamma is actually very thin. Which she hated herself for it. She tried gaining a bit weight but it never worked.

Fai9al: shammoo awal mara fi 7ayatk mestawia 7lwa et9adgeen

Shamma:int’h chub wala kelma

Mona: (giggle) you 2 are really cute when you fight, dont worry about him shamma you looh gorgous mashallah

Shamma: 5ala9 then im getting it

It was my turn to look for the perfect dress. We started looking but I didn’t find anything I really like. Nothing was perfect yet. I started to get tired form all the walking so I sat down infront of a shop.

Shamma: OMG THIS ONE, THIS ONE

Mona: bismillah what?

I stood up and there is was infront of me the perfect weddig dress
There is was off white, v-neck cut. It had this cloth collected at the back of the dress with flowers. It looked amazing.

Shamma: yallah go now try it on!!!

Mona: ok ok here ta3ali wiyay I need a second opinion

Fai9al: ezain sar3oo o ba3dain rawoonii

Shamma: la2 you are the groom its bad luck for you to see it

Fai9al: sho 9adagtii el5arabee6 intii

Mona: well it is going ot be a surprise for that day

I tried it on and I sure liked what I saw. It was amazing. I loved it I went out and heard gasps and shrieks.

Shamma: 5ala9 your getting it, may59nii you have too

Mona: yeah?? U sure about it??

Shamma: fai9al is going to die if he sees you in this

Ghada’s point of view:

After all the convincing 7mood agreed to go home with me and talk to my parent about what is going on.

Ghada: uboi tara ho mayet’thakar sho etstiwa

Ghada’s dad: sho mayetthakar? Chay kan sakraan? O ana glt bn7l elmeshklh ya3ni bn7l elmshklh, 7mood betetzawaj sara

Im Sorry

Im sorry that i didnt post last night. It is just that im dealing with personal things right now and  i might not post today either. I will try i promise but if i didnt im sorry.


Anywayz for you for eternity is ending soon, 9 more parts then its the finale. I hope your liking it.


if there is something that you dont like about the story please tell me so that i can fix it and make my story better. I dont know how many people are reading my story but please comment to that i can have a number in mind. You dont have to comment every time just this time. Thank you.

Friday, August 19, 2011

For You For Eternity 61


PART 61

7mood’s point of view:

I went back home to find my mom and dad sitting in the living room. I went up to them to sit with them a bit then go to sleep.

7mood: esalam 3alaikm, ha sho etsawoon, etwanastow fi bu ‘6abi?

Ghada’s dad: wain knt?

7mood: ha ana srt asoog eshway afa’6i rasi

Ghada’s dad: sho etfa’6i rasik ya meswad elwayh yayetenii elyoom w7dh esemha sara etgoolii enha 7amil

7mood: uboi wallah ma3arf sho agoolk

Ghada’s dad: mat3arf sho etgooli ya jleel el7ya, 7amil taraha 7amil. 9dg enk matesti7i 3ala wayhk

7mood: uboi e9br…. Umai

Ghada’s dad: bet7l hai elmshkla tara wallah ana eli baraweek

My dad walked away and mom wont even look at me. I cant even tell them what happened because I don’t know what happened myself. After all this shouting I remembered amna. I turned around and then I found amna standing 
there looking at me.

7mood: amna… I ….

She just ran back to her room and slammed the door

I knocked for her to open the door for me but she didn’t so I just went in her 
room.

7mood: amna im…. Im sorry

Amna: your sorry, that is what you have to say for yourself

7mood: I don’t know what to say

Amna: GET OUT, I SAID GET OUT, I NEVER WANT TO SEE YOUR FACE

She started to sob I couldn’t hug her I couldn’t do anything. I just left the house. I had nowhere to go. Why Is this happening to me. I don’t know what to do. I lost her.

Amna’s point of view:

How could he do this to me. I love him and he loves me. That is what I thought. I don’t know what to think. 7mood would never do this to me. He is not this kind of guy. I need ghada right now. First my parents and now 7mood. Everyone that I loved had to be taken away from me.

Ghada’s point of view:

It was mid-night when I heard the door bell. 5laid opened the door and found 7mood standing there. He looked terrible. From the way he was looking at me I knew something was going on. Something VERY bad is going on. He sat down and told me everything.

7mood: ghada wallah ma2athakar wallah

She just kept going on about amna and how about he wouldn’t do such a thing 
to her. I cant stand the look of my brother like this. I just hugged him while he sighed in disbelief. I didn’t know what to do but I know that tomorrow I have to go down to my parents house and talk to them. See what is going on.